Tuesday 4 September 2018

that kid





Hello I wrote this story because I like mystery . We did this in homeroom for free writing.  I hope you like it.





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  1. Unknown17 September 2018 at 10:57

    Hi, it's Esther and Charlotte from room 4, we really liked your story very much but next time you could check your punctuation,but over all it was really good.
    go check our blogs:http://kaniereestherm.blogspot.com/ ,http://kanierecharlottes.blogspot.com/.
    happy blogging

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